I like the front cover, but think the title font is too squeezed and hard to read, would recommend a handwritten- style font as opposed to the calligraphy to give a dreamy look. The rest is laid out nicely, though the inner front flap is a bit blank. perhaps bringing the woodblock texture in, slightly faded, could fill the space nicely. Otherwise, the concept and direction is great, just a few tweaks to the formatting and alignment could really bring out this design's potential.
I like the front cover, but think the title font is too squeezed and hard to read, would recommend a handwritten- style font as opposed to the calligraphy to give a dreamy look. The rest is laid out nicely, though the inner front flap is a bit blank. perhaps bringing the woodblock texture in, slightly faded, could fill the space nicely. Otherwise, the concept and direction is great, just a few tweaks to the formatting and alignment could really bring out this design's potential.
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